Incident log Lou Skrivara

Tag: show don't tell

  1. February 19, 2026

    Craft & Voice / Inside Moldeth City

    Gravy, Not Sauce: Why the Small Stuff Carries the Whole Book

    Call it "sauce" and the reader who knows closes the book. Why the small, specific stuff carries the whole novel.

  2. January 2, 2026

    Craft & Voice

    How to Tell the Reader a Guy Is Dangerous Without Saying It

    The sentence "he was dangerous" does nothing. Here's how to make a reader believe it — without ever using the word.